We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing. We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.
Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:
Lunch time would be good to watch a movie because lunch time gets boring.
To start, movies would be good because it would keep all the students happy.
Secondly, it would keep the students entertained and calm.
Thirdly, everyone might fall asleep so it would be quiet.
I would appreciate having movies at school so we would be entertained have lots of fun also being calm.
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