Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Wonder



This is what we have been learning about a kid thats' different and he goes to school he looks weird people think.We read it at school its a insterting book.

Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Persuasive writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:

Lunch time would be good to watch a movie because lunch time gets boring.

To start, movies would be good because it would keep all the students happy.

Secondly, it would keep the students entertained and calm.

Thirdly, everyone might fall asleep so it would be quiet.

I would appreciate having movies at school so we would be entertained  have lots of fun also being calm.